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Title: Cleaving
Author: baudown
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Disclaimer: Don't own them
Written for: open_on_sunday
Word count: 100
Prompt: French
Warning: Character death



Friends come to call, with red-rimmed eyes.  Xander would have wanted this -- for them to mourn together -- but Spike's not one to share.  His grief is his.  And Xander isn't here to disappoint.

He locks the door, he shuts his eyes.  Look, another vision!   Perhaps it's just a conjured dream.  Or is it memory?

Did they dance in a ruined garden?  Sing lullabies in French?  Rise, like spirits, from the ashes?  Walk with heroes, arm-in-arm?

And did he love a dark-eyed boy?

And also: was he loved?

It's only ghosts that live here now.  There's no one left to answer.


Date: 2014-06-14 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chasingdemons.livejournal.com
No! What happened to Xander? Can't anything end well? *weeps*
(Another lovely drabble, my dear.)

Date: 2014-06-14 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Thank you! And I'm sorry!

Date: 2014-06-14 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com
Very evocative. I like it.

Date: 2014-06-14 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm happy you did.

Date: 2014-06-14 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com
Oh hell, you made me all teary!

Date: 2014-06-14 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Mea culpa, mea culpa!

Date: 2014-06-14 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velvetwhip.livejournal.com
Oh god. This is gorgeous, mysterious, and so tragic. Brilliant work, as always.


Gabrielle

Date: 2014-06-14 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
See, I'm back! And thank you so much for this wonderful feedback.

Date: 2014-06-14 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] waddiwasiwitch.livejournal.com
Oh nicely done.

Date: 2014-06-15 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Thanks very much.
Edited Date: 2014-06-15 09:29 am (UTC)

Date: 2014-06-15 09:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leni-ba.livejournal.com
*broken hearted*

But what a beautiful drabble!

Date: 2014-06-15 12:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Thank you, and apologies for the heartbreak. *g*

Date: 2014-06-16 04:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thismaz.livejournal.com
Love that middle line.
Love all the lines.
Spike's inner poet resurfaces and is not bloody awful.
Lovely.

Date: 2014-06-16 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you.

The poet's always there, isn't he?

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