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Title:  Inches

Author:  baudown

Pairing:  Spike/Xander

Disclaimer:  Don't own them

Written for:  open_on_sunday

Prompt:  Ring

Word count:  100


Xander makes a joke.  Spike is the only one laughing.  Their eyes meet, surprised.  It's the first time it happens.  It isn't the last.

Spike wanders by, drink in hand.  Xander nods for him to sit.  Beneath the bar, their knees bump.  Neither pulls away.

"Don't touch him," Spike says, killingly calm.  The words ring out clear as a death knell.  Xander's father steps back, fists uncurling.

Xander thinks about how the lines and curves of Spike's face fit together -- lips, cheekbones, brows.  It's a face that's worthy of eternity.

Their mouths meet, the first kiss.  It isn't the last.

Date: 2014-04-26 12:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comlodge.livejournal.com
Oh, well written to the prompt. It's a face that's worthy of eternity. Lovely!

And bonus I re read Rembered if Outlived. I so love your writing style.

Date: 2014-04-26 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! And I'm glad Remembered, If Outlived held up on re-reading.

Date: 2014-04-26 02:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velvetwhip.livejournal.com
This is terrific! You managed to show the evolution of a relationship in only 100 words.


Gabrielle

Date: 2014-04-26 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
That was the goal, so I'm pleased it worked for you. Thanks!

Date: 2014-04-26 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chasingdemons.livejournal.com
You make me believe in Spander. I especially love the part about the joke. Well done!

Date: 2014-04-26 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
It's part of my nefarious plot to lure unsuspecting folk into Spander-love.

Thank you!

Date: 2014-04-26 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com
You've got your drabble mojo going - it's lovely to behold.

Date: 2014-04-26 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Thank you, hon. Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2014-04-26 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katleept.livejournal.com
Beautiful! And Xander SO deserves to be rescued from his family. That was one thing I feel Joss always let us down on.

Date: 2014-04-26 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
I know -- poor boy.

Thank you.

Date: 2014-04-26 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] singedbylife.livejournal.com
Oh, you're so good! I loved it.

Date: 2014-04-26 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
You're too nice! I'm so glad you liked it.

Date: 2014-05-05 02:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorot.livejournal.com
Sweet, thank you for sharing!

Date: 2014-05-05 04:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com
Thank you right back!

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