First of, Xander's thoughts ARE Xander. I hear him perfectly .
Secondly your writing is beautiful.
And lastly, the ending is wonderful. I sighed blissfully when their lips finally met in a mutual kiss, their unspoken declaration of love.
It's perfect as it is but I wouldn't mind, say a drabble from the first time one or both of them say it out loud :) look, I just don't want it end, alright! :)
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Date: 2013-07-27 03:02 am (UTC)Secondly your writing is beautiful.
And lastly, the ending is wonderful. I sighed blissfully when their lips finally met in a mutual kiss, their unspoken declaration of love.
It's perfect as it is but I wouldn't mind, say a drabble from the first time one or both of them say it out loud :) look, I just don't want it end, alright! :)