It seems that all I wanted to say has been expressed more confidently and fluently in previous comments. Fantastic work. Rather than tell a story you are describing a series of movements and emotions so instead of just picturing the action in a mechanical I was feeling it and living through it, you made it incredibly intimate. As for how hot it was...excuse me while I go take care of a few things
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Date: 2012-11-22 01:02 am (UTC)