And yes, exactly. I'm afraid I've jumped the border and crossed the line. I mean, literally, the next several parts are just pages and pages of describing sex. I know it's too much, but I don't know how to fix it. But I'm thinking, if I just take the plunge and post this, maybe I can move on and do something a little more restrained.
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Date: 2012-09-10 10:55 am (UTC)And yes, exactly. I'm afraid I've jumped the border and crossed the line. I mean, literally, the next several parts are just pages and pages of describing sex. I know it's too much, but I don't know how to fix it. But I'm thinking, if I just take the plunge and post this, maybe I can move on and do something a little more restrained.