It's wonderful the way you gave such depth to Spike's named but still somehow anonymous victims. I really felt for them. The depth of Spike's grief is so tangible, you really made it sing. And Xander might have had a relatively fleeting role, but it's the weight of his appearance that matters, and boy did you make it count.
So many brilliant lines I could quote, but this one..
"Battle scars of a failed campaign, directed inward." That one is the killer.
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Date: 2011-12-05 02:51 pm (UTC)It's wonderful the way you gave such depth to Spike's named but still somehow anonymous victims. I really felt for them. The depth of Spike's grief is so tangible, you really made it sing. And Xander might have had a relatively fleeting role, but it's the weight of his appearance that matters, and boy did you make it count.
So many brilliant lines I could quote, but this one..
"Battle scars of a failed campaign, directed inward." That one is the killer.
Bravo hon, that was fantastic.