Oh, yay! Because my real fear is not being able to convey hotness. There's something so subtle about what divides hot from not-hot, and I'm not really sure what that divider is, although for me, it definitely has something to do with emotional content.

Next chapter is sex-heavy, too, and then it calms down slightly (not completely, though). Hope it keeps working for you.

Thank you as always for reading, and for being so thoughtful and encouraging.