Well. *ahem* So, that? Nothing to be ashamed/worried about! Holy crap, that was hot! And it wasn't like a manual of sex actions or anything, either, which is the downfall of some of the lesser talented of authors (not just fanfiction, even professional ones, I've seen, do that, too!).

So in short, I love your Spike, your Xander, the addition of your writing sex scenes (whoa!), and hope to read more soon.